Freedom - My Modification

Posted by Praveen 11 November, 2005

the previous one was written by colin :) (another gr8 one m8)

i edited the last set of words

Freedom ….
To Speak ….
To Act ….
To Change ….
Re-Arrange

Freedom ….
To Speak …. Yet I Cannot
To Act …. Yet I Dare Not
To Change …. Yet I Will Not
Re-Arrange

Freedom ….
To Speak …. What I am Told
To Act …. By Whom I Am Told
To Change …. As I Am Told
Re-Arrange

Freedom ….
To Speak …. must be taken
To Act …. must be fought
To Change …. must be won
Never Re-Arrange without a fight
For Freedom is your right.

To Quote Colin on this mod

Interesting re-write of the last verse, I wrote it with the idea in mind that there is no hope for freedom and you have changed it so that hope is given.

Thank you :)

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